...Eventually.
Also, I wrote myself into a ditch. A ditch that I saw coming for miles but didn't actually realize how deep it was until I fell in.
Okay, to be honest it wasn't all that deep, but it felt like it. I had to write this extremely awkward scene in which two of my main characters meet for the first time. Why, you may ask, is it awkward? Well, one of the characters can't talk and the other is not exactly good with people (plus he didn't know that the other couldn't speak). That led to quite an issue. On top of that, they were in the middle of a rainstorm, standing out on the sidewalk. So here's what I finally decided on:
~*~
The two stood there for a moment, both waiting for the other
to speak first. Rale decided it would be best to greet him, maybe even
introduce himself.
"You're going to
get mugged again if you just stand there," Rale said bluntly, speaking
loudly to be heard over the storm. The other teen seemed to be slightly taken
aback, and then he straightened his posture so he no longer leaned against the
building. Rale rubbed the back of his neck nervously and waited for a response.~*~
Heh. I laughed a bit at that. Rale is an interesting character... I always have fun writing about him. :)
I know it needs quite a bit of work still, though I think that'll do for now.
Signing Off,
~Sydney J.
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